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	<title>Comments on: How to Help Your Children Write Clearly and Concisely</title>
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		<title>By: Barbara Frank</title>
		<link>http://barbarafrankonline.com/blog.php/2009/04/18/how-to-help-your-children-write-clearly-and-concisely/comment-page-1/#comment-999</link>
		<dc:creator>Barbara Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 May 2009 21:13:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A similar assignment, and a good one....thanks for sharing that, Dan!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A similar assignment, and a good one&#8230;.thanks for sharing that, Dan!</p>
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		<title>By: Dan</title>
		<link>http://barbarafrankonline.com/blog.php/2009/04/18/how-to-help-your-children-write-clearly-and-concisely/comment-page-1/#comment-979</link>
		<dc:creator>Dan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2009 05:11:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I recall an exercise in a writing class in college. We kept rewriting a long description of a room in fewer and fewer words. Eventually, we were limited to some very short number of sentences. It was very difficult, but so surprising how much our descriptions improved.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I recall an exercise in a writing class in college. We kept rewriting a long description of a room in fewer and fewer words. Eventually, we were limited to some very short number of sentences. It was very difficult, but so surprising how much our descriptions improved.</p>
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		<title>By: Barbara Frank</title>
		<link>http://barbarafrankonline.com/blog.php/2009/04/18/how-to-help-your-children-write-clearly-and-concisely/comment-page-1/#comment-943</link>
		<dc:creator>Barbara Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 May 2009 23:37:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Happy to help, Bonnie---thanks for stopping by!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Happy to help, Bonnie&#8212;thanks for stopping by!</p>
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		<title>By: Bonnie Trenga</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bonnie Trenga</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Apr 2009 21:46:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hello. Thank you for showcasing my book. I believe it is an excellent resource for homeschooling (and pretty much anyone else who wants to improve their writing).
I wanted to let you know about my blog, sentencesleuth.blogspot.com, which homeschoolers might enjoy (and their parents, too!). Please check it out and vote on this week&#039;s poll. 
My book is available on the Timberdoodle homeschooling site.
Best, Bonnie Trenga</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello. Thank you for showcasing my book. I believe it is an excellent resource for homeschooling (and pretty much anyone else who wants to improve their writing).<br />
I wanted to let you know about my blog, sentencesleuth.blogspot.com, which homeschoolers might enjoy (and their parents, too!). Please check it out and vote on this week&#8217;s poll.<br />
My book is available on the Timberdoodle homeschooling site.<br />
Best, Bonnie Trenga</p>
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		<title>By: Barbara Frank</title>
		<link>http://barbarafrankonline.com/blog.php/2009/04/18/how-to-help-your-children-write-clearly-and-concisely/comment-page-1/#comment-894</link>
		<dc:creator>Barbara Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Apr 2009 16:53:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Janet, I think teachers give those directions because otherwise most kids will turn in something brief because they&#039;re not motivated to do more. That&#039;s yet another good thing about homeschooling....we know each child and what they&#039;re capable of doing. We have the freedom to say, just write!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Janet, I think teachers give those directions because otherwise most kids will turn in something brief because they&#8217;re not motivated to do more. That&#8217;s yet another good thing about homeschooling&#8230;.we know each child and what they&#8217;re capable of doing. We have the freedom to say, just write!</p>
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		<title>By: Janet</title>
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		<dc:creator>Janet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Apr 2009 04:00:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I LOVE it. I always think it&#039;s a shame when a teacher gives a student the direction that he must write 10 pages on whatever topic. What if he could do a better job writing 5 pages? I tell my kids there is no particular limit. They have to write about what I&#039;ve asked them to write about and be CONCISE. They&#039;re probably pretty sick of hearing that, come to think of it....:-) A lot of LONG papers are repetition. A lot of long papers are repetition. See how annoying that is? ;-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I LOVE it. I always think it&#8217;s a shame when a teacher gives a student the direction that he must write 10 pages on whatever topic. What if he could do a better job writing 5 pages? I tell my kids there is no particular limit. They have to write about what I&#8217;ve asked them to write about and be CONCISE. They&#8217;re probably pretty sick of hearing that, come to think of it&#8230;.:-) A lot of LONG papers are repetition. A lot of long papers are repetition. See how annoying that is? <img src='http://barbarafrankonline.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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